Ken (coronation street poem/story in verse)

[valda]

Hi please can you let me know what you think of this poem? I wrote it the other night, thank you Valerie (Val)
Ken

Why thought Ken are we blessed with ungratefull kid`s
Deidre,s and my life isnt over but thank,s to them our love life is on the skid,s
take,take,take that,s all they ever do
Peter is a bigamist and Tracy has been round a block or two

Adam can`t seem to make up his mind
he sold his share in the factory and got robbed blind
as Deidre babysat for Tracy Ken wondered where did we go wrong
when Blanche shouted out of the window at her as she met Charlie stop dumping Amy around the street and stay at home with her where you belong

Tracy gave a smirk as she replyed granny dear those day`s have long gone past
Ken gave a long suffering sigh and hoped those word`s would be Tracy`s last
Amy is a delightfull child she must take after Steve thought Ken
if she take`s after mum in later life thank god we will be dead by then
and all I wanted was a quiet life
I love wearing my cardigan`s and having a drink in the Rover`s with Deidre my wife

[jessi]

Aww! Thats awesome

[valda]

Thank you Jessi I`m pleased you like it