mrsbarlow
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Bang Bang Chitty Chitty Bang Bang our fine four fended friend.
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Post by mrsbarlow on Jul 9, 2005 21:33:10 GMT
Here is a little peom from Amy's point of view,cos its not often we hear a babys point of view
Hello,my name is Amy Mcdonald Barlow
I am just one-years -old
I have had an eventful life
One that has so far be full of strife
Its all my mummy's doing you see
She is a little bit crazy
I hope it dosent run in the family!
When i was not yet born
Realtionships and family's became torn
My mommy tried to sell me
To a man named Roy and a woman called hayley
I was born into a lot of hustle and bustle
My entrance into this world caused a lot of trouble
This is all for now,let me know what u think ,and if i should continue
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Post by RitaLittlewood on Jul 10, 2005 16:40:25 GMT
LOL! That's spot on. More please. ;D
Patsy
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Post by eithne on Jul 13, 2005 20:46:40 GMT
Definitley unusual, but I like it! More purleasseee!
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Post by Jade on Jul 14, 2005 23:10:10 GMT
yeah thats brill! And soo cute! Some more please!  |
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mrsbarlow
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Bang Bang Chitty Chitty Bang Bang our fine four fended friend.
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Post by mrsbarlow on Jul 16, 2005 0:16:32 GMT
Thanks for the replies,i am going to write the second half today/tomorrow because i have to brush up on the events of Amy's first year.I have a bit more ,bit its only rough work so I'll post it anyway.
One dark winters night
I was put into a car that was set alight
I got out safely
Tanks to Hayley
My mother went crazy
She thought that Karen had took my life
So she fought daddy's wife
My daddy was also angry
I was asleep and sound
While there was chaos all around
My mummy was more than happy
When she seen me alive
Although daddy and Karen's marriage had taken a dive
I turned one the other day
A few words i can now say
I hope my life will be easy
Although everytime my mother grins
Granny asks her has she committed more sins
Looks like my life wont be easy
Why, Oh Why is my mother Tracey?
Anything could happen in the next year you know
Well right now I'm happy just being Amy MC Donald Barlow
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mrsbarlow
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Bang Bang Chitty Chitty Bang Bang our fine four fended friend.
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Post by mrsbarlow on Jul 16, 2005 0:18:35 GMT
On second thoughts that is the rest of the poem.Sorry about the length of the poem ,there was a lot of important stuff that i had to put in.
Anyway enjoy my poem
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Post by RitaLittlewood on Jul 16, 2005 22:38:22 GMT
LOL! That was good. I enjoyed that. Thanks for posting it. Patsy |
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Post by Jade on Jul 18, 2005 12:09:25 GMT
Thanx for that Mrs Barlow it was great!  Really cute as well... |
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Really cute as well...