mrsbarlow
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Bang Bang Chitty Chitty Bang Bang our fine four fended friend.
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Post by mrsbarlow on Jul 20, 2005 21:49:53 GMT
Way down in Coronation Street
There are lots of interesting people to meet.
The drama,laughter,and welcome will bowl you over
When you set foot in the pub of many returns of the Rover.
In the Kabin there is lots of things Happening.
Whether its Rita's singing or Norri s's yapping.
This is yet another poem by me,i don't think its that good,but let me know what you think and i will write more(if i have a good/or bad reviews)
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Post by Jade on Jul 21, 2005 14:30:53 GMT
Hey! No honest i think it is good please continue you obviouly have a knack for this mrsbarlow as your amy barlow poem waas brill.  Please continue! |
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mrsbarlow
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Post by mrsbarlow on Jul 21, 2005 21:03:26 GMT
Thanks for the nice review Jade,everyones comments good or bad are always appreciated.Ok here is verse two,its very Barlowish.
Pop into number one and you will surely find a Barlow.
There isn't a thing that Ken won't know.
You'll be greeted by Blanche's friendly face.
Which will soon turn into a sour grimace.
Thats all for today,let me know what you will think and i will write another verse.
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Post by Jade on Jul 21, 2005 22:23:14 GMT
Thats really goos honestly! Please continue I for one would love to hear some more! |
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Post by RitaLittlewood on Jul 22, 2005 17:23:26 GMT
Excellent stuff. You're certainly good with peotry. I was rubbish at school.
Patsy
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Post by Jade on Jul 23, 2005 22:38:06 GMT
Im rubbish at school! LOL! Me version of a poem is somthing like : The man with the hat, walked just like that! LMAO! |
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mrsbarlow
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Post by mrsbarlow on Jul 23, 2005 23:07:42 GMT
I'm very tired at the moment ,so there won't be a new verse right now,but i will have another verse up by the end of the day.
Thanks to everybody for their really kind reviews,all criticism good or bad is always appreciated.
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Post by Jade on Jul 25, 2005 0:28:50 GMT
It's no probs, Mrs B! Still can't wait to here some more.  |
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mrsbarlow
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Post by mrsbarlow on Jul 25, 2005 9:28:46 GMT
Don't be surprised when you take a trip to the red rec
If you get hit by a football,you will shout bloody hec.
But don't be hard on young David Platt
Its not his fault he didn't save it
When you arrive at the bus stop
You will see plenty of kids on the hop
There you'll meet young Craig
Who's family has been wiped out like the plague.
There that is all for now,i didn't think the first verse was that good,because I've had writers block.So again all your comments good or bad are appreciated.
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Post by RitaLittlewood on Jul 25, 2005 21:08:26 GMT
LOL! You'll have probably given the writers the next Platt storyline, mrsbarlow. Love it!
Patsy
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Post by Jade on Aug 4, 2005 23:29:43 GMT
Yeah! Its brill! Really witty! More please! |
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mrsbarlow
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Post by mrsbarlow on Aug 29, 2005 10:12:43 GMT
As the summer is now done and out
It seems that good story-lines are in a drought
As Les turns 50
And cilia looks shifty.
With yana always butting in
We often have young chesney wondering
Will Les be his new father
Because their is no man our chesney would rather
I can't think of anything better to write at the moment ,because I'm feeling really uninspired,I'll try to write something better.
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Please continue!
