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Post by Jade on Aug 5, 2005 14:03:43 GMT
Hey just to say that the piece of fan fiction I am about to post is me first ever story that I have written own my own, so all complients are greatly appreciated. And, please can I have all honest opipions. Also, to day that firstly there have been a few updates ok? Lloyd has moved in with Eileen and Jason and Violet are engaged. Sean has moved in above the pub and is now dating Tim. Sunita has also given both to a little girl called tasha and Shelley has borken up with Charlie and still runs the Rovers, where Charlie has sold the builders yard and Jason now has a new boss. The first part is also quite boring and will seem quite pointless, but you will see the point in it, pretty soon...  |
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Post by Jade on Aug 5, 2005 14:08:38 GMT
Part One
It was a normal Sunday afternoon in the Grimshaw household. Violet and Lloyd where both out working and Eileen was preparing Sunday dinner, while Jason was lying on the settee watching the TV…
Eileen: ‘This stupid oven is playing up AGAIN! So, much for getting a new one! ’ Eileen is getting really annoyed and harassed. ‘Are you going to gave me a hand in here or what?’ There is silence. Eileen stands in the doorway between the living room and the kitchen and stares at Jason wearing her apron and a pair of oven gloves. She is bright red and her hair is all over the place and sticking to her face. ‘Jason!’ Still to respond. ‘JASON!’
Jason still facing the TV: ‘Huh?’ Having had enough Eileen walks over to Jason and standing behind the coach she hits him hard on the head.
Jason standing up quickly and rubbing his head. ‘WHAT DID YOU DO THAT FOR?!’
Eileen: (Angry) ‘Why do you think?! Men! They are all the same! Bone bloody idle!’
Jason: ‘What are you on about?! You are off your head woman!’
Eileen: ‘I would have to be leaving with you!’
Jason! ‘I’ve had enough of this! I’m off to the pub!’ Jason goes into the hall and gets his jacket and wallet. Eileen follows Jason into the hall.
Eileen: ‘DON’T YOU DARE SLAM THAT-‘ But she is interrupted by the front door slamming shut. Eileen tuts and returns to the kitchen to finish preparing the dinner.
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Post by RitaLittlewood on Aug 5, 2005 19:12:21 GMT
LOL! That's good, Jade. I can imagine Eileen doing that to Jason. And so true about 99% of the male population. More!  Patsy |
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Post by Jade on Aug 5, 2005 22:28:34 GMT
Thanks for the comments Patsy! Yeah, i know! Isn't it just! Im in the middle of writing the second part and i will post it soon. |
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Post by RitaLittlewood on Aug 6, 2005 13:58:51 GMT
Can't wait. Patsy |
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Post by Jade on Aug 10, 2005 14:12:14 GMT
Soz it took so long been quite buzy anyways here's part two. Hope you like it! |
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Post by Jade on Aug 10, 2005 14:12:33 GMT
Part Two
The scene has now moved to the pub, where Jason is sitting at the bar with Tyrone. Violet and Shelley are serving and Sean is collecting glasses.
Jason: ‘She’s always nagging me, it doing me head in!’ Jason takes a drink. ‘I mean I’m 21! For god’s sake!’
Tyrone: ‘Yeah, well women they are all the same! Nag. Nag, nag, whatever you do you just can’t please them!’
Jason: ‘You’re telling me!’ Jason downs his pint. ‘Gets us another one in there Shell will ya?’
Shelley: ‘Coming up!’ Shelley pulls the pint. ‘That’s £1.85 Jason love, thanks.’
Sean having finished collecting the glasses and appears behind Jason in at the bar.
Sean: ‘You should be grateful to Eileen, I am! She’s a doll!’ Sean walks behind the bar.
Jason: ‘Did anyone ask for your opinion?!’
Sean: ‘Well, all I’m say-‘ But Sean is interrupted by a bloodcurdling shriek coming from the street.
Shelley: ‘What on earth is that?’
Suddenly, Leanne bursts into the rovers as white as a sheet shaking and gasps for breath. Tyrone and Jason run over to her and sit her down at the bar.
Leanne: ‘Jason! It’s your mum! There’s been a fire! Smokes everywhere! Jamie’s just gone in!’
Jason: (Goes as white as a sheet) and runs out of the pub followed, by Leanne, Tyrone, Violet and Sean...
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