Sally (poem/verse fiction)

[valda]

Hi I,m not sure whether you accept poem`s/verse fiction, , but I wrote this one about Sally Webster last night, and would like to know if it`s good or bad could you tell me please? , thank you I,d appreciate it . Valerie (Val)

Sally

Poor Sally Webster was at her wit`s end
couldn`t work out what to do should she be a mother or her children,s friend
Rosie was her pride and joy
but was in love with Craig who isn`t really a bad boy

Sophie is going through a crush
on Cameron and Sally was panic stricken that Sophie was growing up in a rush
first her youngest had been drinking then stealing to smoke Sally hoped it was Sophie`s age
couldn`t understand any of it Kevin and the girl`s just wondered why she kept going in a rage

Sally walked over to Baldwin`s factory to start her knicker sewing
she and Janice spent the day at each other bitching and Danny`s anger was growing
after a hard day`s work Sally went home to make the family tea
no wonder Kevin and the girl`s are fed up with her because fish finger`s and chip`s are all she had learned to cook you see

[pearly queen]

A Day In The Life of The Websters in rhyming couplets - complete with the obligatory fish fingers! Nice work, valda!

[valda]

thank you pearly I`m so pleased you like it

[CG Wendy]

You`ve captured Sally perfectly. Findus would be out of business if it wasn`t for Sally lol
Well done Valda
;D

[RitaLittlewood]

Excellent Valda. Yes anything. It's sort of fan fiction after all.

Patsy

[valda]

thank you Corriegirl and RitaI`m so pleased that you like it, I`ve got another about Fred and Eve will put it on soon if that`s ok?

[RitaLittlewood]

Go ahead with anything at all, Valda.

Patsy

[bubblegum]

this is really great, and the fred and eve one too

[valda]

thank you bubblegum I really do appreciate it