Sharon's Shocker - Part 1

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Sharon’s Shocker

(The Queen Vic, Den is holding a congratulation party for Zoë’s ‘’’pregnancy’’’ with Dennis, all the locals are in celebrating)

Dot – Bet you’re over the moon Zoe
Zoe – yeah! Dennis is gonna make a great dad!
Pauline – (sarcastically) like his father?
Zoe – I know you aint all too keen on the way Den’s brought his kids up, but Dennis is gonna be different, I can tell
Dot – Had ya been trying long?
Zoe – (giggling) we hadn’t even been trying, but it’s happened and we’re really pleased!
Pauline – oh well Congratulations, I wish you all the best!
Zoe – Awww thanks Pauline
Dot – here (pulling out a Baby’s hat and gloves set), I made this for the baby
Zoe – Oh, you didn’t have to! Thanks so much!
Dot – don’t worry about it, my pleasure!

(We cross over to Den and Chrissie behind the bar)

Chrissie – I thought we could invite Dennis and Zoe over tomorrow night for Dinner, have a family get together
Den – ummm I don’t think so
Chrissie – Why
Den – It just won’t be the same
Chrissie – What without Sharon and Vikki by your side! Look Den, Sharon and Vikki have gone, there’s nothing you can do to bring em back.
Den – Leave it out Chrissie
Chrissie – No Den, you’ve gotta start coming to terms with this
Den – I’m gonna give the toast
Chrissie – Fine
Den – (rings the bell), Can I have your attention please
(All look at Den)
Den – Now as you all know this evening is for my son Dennis and his girlfriend; Zoe who have recently just found out they’re expecting a baby. It doesn’t take a genius to work out these 2 are gonna be fantastic parents to a fantastic baby. Now if you could all join me in raising a glass… To Zoe and Dennis
All – To Zoe and Dennis!
Den – Now all you old gossips and drunks have to go home im afraid
All – awwwwwwww
Den – Well its gone closing time and its back to work for most of ya tomorrow, so come on sling your hooks

(Everyone leaves the pub; Dennis and Zoe go back to their flat and begin passionately kissing on the couch, when suddenly there’s an almighty smash!)

Zoe – (scared) Dennis what was that
Dennis – ssshhh stay quiet for a minute
(We hear footsteps going along the corridor)
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Dennis – Whose there?!?!?
(The door slowly opens)
Dennis – SHARON!
Sharon – Your door is a nightmare to get through
Zoe – What the blooming hell are you doing here?
Sharon – Oh haven’t you missed me?
Zoe – Not particularly
Dennis – (mixed between Happy and confusion) what are you doing here!
Zoe – (upset) Get out of here now
Sharon – What ya gonna do eh? Through a little tantrum
Zoe – Shut up you grovelling little cow
Sharon – Oh grow up, you sound even more pathetic than you look!
Dennis – Right! Both of you shut up. Is this all you 2 can do? Fight!
Zoe – (to Sharon, crying and angered) you can’t accept it can ya? That he chose me over you!
Sharon – Chose! He didn’t choose! He was forced too! He’s only staying with you cos you’re up the duff!
Zoe – Nah he loves me, I know he does!
Sharon – Oh give over, you’re nothing but a cheap sleazy tart
Zoe – You Cow (Zoe slaps Sharon across the face)
Sharon – ooooh little girls shouldn’t play with bigger girls! (Slaps Zoe back, knocking Zoe to the floor)
Dennis – leave it Sharon!
Sharon – No, I didn’t come here to get slapped by some sleaze ball like Zoe
Zoe – What you here for then eh?! Try and get him to fall in love with ya! It aint gonna happen Sharon, so get over it!
Sharon – Well there’s summink I need to tell Dennis
Zoe – What!
Sharon – I’m pregnant!

[eithne]

Wow! Looking forward to the next part. Didn't expect it to be that Sharon was pregnant at all really, because of her feritility problems. But the great thing about "fan-fic" is that it doesn't matter! ;D

Can wait to see how Den will react, and Zoe too!

A really good first story!

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Part 2

Dennis – (shocked) what d’ya mean you’re pregnant!
Zoe – No! You can’t be
Dennis – I thought you couldn’t have kids!?
Sharon – So did I, turned out all the tests were wrong, mixed up or summin
Zoe – (almost in floods of tears) you’re lying
Sharon – You think id do something as pathetic as that eh? Lie about a pregnancy just to get him back
Zoe – Knowing your past you would
Sharon – Yeah ive done some bitchy things in the past but I wouldn’t stoop that low, believe me!
Zoe – Prove it
Sharon – Oh for gods sake (pulls out some doctors documents) there!
Zoe – (crying) no! This can’t be true!
Dennis – When did ya find out?
Sharon – About 2 days ago, I’m already 2 months gone
Dennis – (crying) Look Sharon, you mean so much to me and I love you with all my heart, but we can’t be together, its just better this way
(Sharon’s enraged; she runs at Zoe and pulls her hair tightly. Zoe screams but she wont let go)
Zoe – (screaming) get off me you mad cow!
Dennis – (trying to get her off, Angered) Sharon what the hell do you think your playing at?!
(Sharon kicks Dennis, he falls to the floor)
Dennis – (agony) Sharon please
Sharon – No! If I can’t have ya neither can she!!
Zoe – Oh what you gonna do eh? Kill me!
Sharon – YES!
(Sharon pulls a gun from her coat pocket)
Dennis – Sharon don’t do this, please? Im begging you
Sharon – Oh save the sob story
(Dennis walks towards Sharon)
Zoe – Sharon please, let me go
(Sharon raises the gun to Zoë’s stomach)
Sharon – Might as well kill 2 birds with one stone!
Zoe – Please Sharon! Don’t do summin stupid like this?
Sharon – Too late for grovelling!
Dennis – Can’t we sort this out, properly?
Sharon – I SAID NO! Look I came here to do summin, and I aint leaving till ive done it!
Zoe – Well come on then lets get it over and done with eh! Come on! Shoot me! Oh come on whats wrong eh? This all an act!? You pathetic low life tart!
Sharon – (SCREAMS. She points the gun at Zoë’s stomach and then…..
BANG
Dennis – NO!!!

Sharon then goes to point the gun at Zoë’s head. Dennis fearing she will shoot again runs towards her. He pushes her away but she tries to get to Zoe again. As Sharon starts punching, Dennis picks up the nearest thing he can find; A plate. As Sharon continues to fight, without realising he smashes the plate over her head. Sharon slumps to the floor with her head cut. Dennis then breaks down in tears as he kneels between them both!

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Part 2

Dennis – (shocked) what d’ya mean you’re pregnant!
Zoe – No! You can’t be
Dennis – I thought you couldn’t have kids!?
Sharon – So did I, turned out all the tests were wrong, mixed up or summin
Zoe – (almost in floods of tears) you’re lying
Sharon – You think id do something as pathetic as that eh? Lie about a pregnancy just to get him back
Zoe – Knowing your past you would
Sharon – Yeah ive done some bitchy things in the past but I wouldn’t stoop that low, believe me!
Zoe – Prove it
Sharon – Oh for gods sake (pulls out some doctors documents) there!
Zoe – (crying) no! This can’t be true!
Dennis – When did ya find out?
Sharon – About 2 days ago, I’m already 2 months gone
Dennis – (crying) Look Sharon, you mean so much to me and I love you with all my heart, but we can’t be together, its just better this way
(Sharon’s enraged; she runs at Zoe and pulls her hair tightly. Zoe screams but she wont let go)
Zoe – (screaming) get off me you mad cow!
Dennis – (trying to get her off, Angered) Sharon what the hell do you think your playing at?!
(Sharon kicks Dennis, he falls to the floor)
Dennis – (agony) Sharon please
Sharon – No! If I can’t have ya neither can she!!
Zoe – Oh what you gonna do eh? Kill me!
Sharon – YES!
(Sharon pulls a gun from her coat pocket)
Dennis – Sharon don’t do this, please? Im begging you
Sharon – Oh save the sob story
(Dennis walks towards Sharon)
Zoe – Sharon please, let me go
(Sharon raises the gun to Zoë’s stomach)
Sharon – Might as well kill 2 birds with one stone!
Zoe – Please Sharon! Don’t do summin stupid like this?
Sharon – Too late for grovelling!
Dennis – Can’t we sort this out, properly?
Sharon – I SAID NO! Look I came here to do summin, and I aint leaving till ive done it!
Zoe – Well come on then lets get it over and done with eh! Come on! Shoot me! Oh come on whats wrong eh? This all an act!? You pathetic low life tart!
Sharon – (SCREAMS. She points the gun at Zoë’s stomach and then…..
BANG
Dennis – NO!!!

Sharon then goes to point the gun at Zoë’s head. Dennis fearing she will shoot again runs towards her. He pushes her away but she tries to get to Zoe again. As Sharon starts punching, Dennis picks up the nearest thing he can find; A plate. As Sharon continues to fight, without realising he smashes the plate over her head. Sharon slumps to the floor with her head cut. Dennis then breaks down in tears as he kneels between them both!

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Part 3

The regulars of Albert Square have swarmed outside after hearing the gun shots and screams. They are all stood outside, looking up at the flat. The police arrive after being called by Pauline, and rush upstairs!

DI Carlton – Oh good god whats happened?!
Dennis – (crying hysterically) Sh-ar-r-on
DI Carlton – look Dennis, whats happened
Dennis – (composing himself), Sharon came over, she had a fight with Zoe then she pulled out a gun
DI Newton – A Gun?
Dennis – Yer. Then she grabbed Zoe and….
DI Carlton – What Dennis?
Dennis – She shot Zoe… in the stomach
DI Newton – Why?
Dennis – Id been seeing Sharon secretly. It was Christmas Day, me and Sharon had decided we were gonna leave Walford, start a new life. But…<br>DI Newton – but what?
Dennis – Zoe announced she was pregnant! So Sharon left, but she came back tonight! I wasn’t expecting her.
DI Carlton – So she came back out of the blue just to shoot Zoe!?
DI Newton – Seems a bit of an unrealistic revenge Mr Rickman
Dennis – (angered) you saying im making this up!
DI Carlton – Were not saying that no, look, carry on with the story. What happened to Sharon?
Dennis – She went to shoot Zoe again, so I stopped her! I tried to get the gun away and move her away from Zoe, but she fought her way back!
DI Newton – So what did you do?
Dennis – I had to use…. an object
DI Newton – You mean you hit her round the head with that plate that’s in pieces on the floor don’t you Dennis!
Dennis – (angry and upset) look it isn’t how it sounds!
DI Newton – Really! To me it seems like you shot Zoe Slater to get rid of her to be with Sharon, but of course she didn’t want to be with you. She’s got signs of forced pressure on her so im predicting that she didn’t want to be with you. You grabbed her trying to stop her from leaving but she wouldn’t. So you used violence! Ya couldn’t get what you wanted so why not finish her off en all! Is that what it was eh?
Dennis – NO IT WASN’T
DI Newton – Oh give over Dennis!
Dennis – Im telling the truth
DI Carlton – We’ve seen your records Mr Rickman so I also feel that my colleague is on to something
Dennis – What!
DI Newton – Mr Rickman, Im arresting you for GBH on Sharon Watts and on Suspicion of murdering Zoe Slater. You do not have to say anything, but it may harm your defence if you fail to mention when questioned something which you later rely on in court. Anything you do say will be given in evidence

[eithne]

Wow! That was really, really good. So many twists, although they did arrest poor Dennis pretty quickly.

[Gemini16]

Wow! This is amazing!